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By Ebony Olson All Rights Reserved ©

Erotica / Fantasy

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For years Seraphina Gaelach has resisted being part of the Alvöru she was born into. After an abusive childhood, Phin thought she left the days of being a helpless victim behind and taken control of her life. All that changed the night Sebastian Maviper, High Lord of the Alvöru, decided to claim her. Three years later, by reuniting with an old friend who is like a brother to her, Phin’s life is put in peril and she is dragged back into Sebastian's world. Can she forgive what he did to her? Old enemies are stirring and uniting in an effort to control the Alvöru, and everyone in it. When they kidnap Granger and Phin as bait to lure Sebastian to their trap, Phin must make decisions and alliances that will potentially destroy all those she cares about.

Prologue


Some say you are the master of your own destiny. That you choose the path your life will run. You may very well believe that. But those who have struggled against their fate, fought to escape the path on which they have been set, know better.

The Parcae, the Moirae, the Norns, or the Fates. Whatever mythologies you choose to follow, they all say the same thing. They control the metaphorical threads of life for every mortal and immortal from birth to death. Fight against fate all you want, it will prevail every time.

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