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The Books of Renly.

By Andrew James Clayton-Bunday All Rights Reserved ©

Fantasy / Adventure

Blurb

Hello all thanks for your previous fed back i have gone away and read and learned some new ways to write blurbs and what they are about. if possible could some one give me some feedback on this new one i have written, and i thank you for your time in advance. this book is a medieval fantasy aimed at 13+ a gladiator meets the worlds of Tolkien and Stan Nicolas with a bit of manga influence weaved between the intricately layered stories revealing themselves as you read. A story set deep within medieval fantasy with magic, wars and deception at every turn, as you learn about the ancestors of the rulers of Erringon a place dominated by honour, battle and coin you have a choice, beat them or join them. Deception, deviance and blackmail is the games of war that takes place in kings courts and counsel halls as wizards play chess and chance with the fate of the realm as heroes worthy of legends and creatures do their battling for them. A story filled with an array of creatures and characters to learn about as they test themselves in the pit fights that fantasy lovers call for, where men stand in front of all sizes of beast, all who dare enter these pits have the instinct and intention to

Prologue

These tales are of a man found in battlefield amongst dead bodies as he struggles to find his way through the twisted loyalties of man and creatures alike. Battling creatures and men of natural and unnatural natures with swords and magic to clear his path making choices and deals to better his life. Along the way making friends in unsuspected places and alliances with some of the most feared and knowledgeable men to forge a better understanding of his past. All the time dodging would be killers and rulers who want to end his rise to power.

In a time where nature is as twisted, dark and unforgiving as those who inhabit the lands of this realm, acting with as much aggression and vengefulness like those who would corrupt and destroy it. Only time will tell what fate has in store for a man of his struggles and nature.

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