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Summary

Elena is 16 years old. She has been homeschooled for 11 years. She one day goes walking down a street to find murder victims. Her sister, Aunt,Cousin, and Crush. But are these deaths leading to something bigger?

Genre:
Horror / Thriller
Author:
Aurora
Status:
Ongoing
Chapters:
2
Rating:
n/a
Age Rating:
13+

Chapter 1:Meeting the problem

I was walking to my house later that night. When I found half my family dead on the street.

"Where?"

"Umm at 76 brio road."

"Then what?"

"LET ME SAY MY STORY OFFICER PLEASE YOU DIDNT KNOW WHAT I SAW!"

"okay..""go on"

"Umm...oh um I saw them on the street. It was empty. No road tracks or car tracks. No foot steps. I dont think it was a person. Maybe a animal or monster..?"

"A animal or monster?"

"Yes.."

". ...."

"What? I'm telling you the truth officer"

"Take her out officer Thomp"

"WHAT WHY IM TELLING THE TRUTH!"

"YOU MAYBE JUST WANT ATTENTION YOUR ONLY 16.. TEENAGERS WANT ATTENTION, ELENA YOU MAY THINK THIS IS FUNNY BUT ITS NOT SO STOP LYING!"

"IM NOT LYING OFFICER J!"

"IM TELLING THE TRUTH!"

"take her out now." He said.

"Yes cheif"

They carried me out and I stood there while he stared at me. I left after that. I started walking where they died.. no blood. It looks like they were stabbed more than 40 times. In the neck. Gross. My crush.My cousin,my aunt,my sister.

They were walking and I dont know why.. oh yeah.. they were maybe planning my 17th birthday. Together and inviting people.that explains the cards in their hands. I didnt call the hospital because they had already died. I didnt know until 3 days later I thought it was normal till I went here to see if they were in someone's house. Then I saw them here..

Right now I'm staring at 4 dead bodies. My aunt,Beck,Crush,Sean,Cosuin,Toby,Sister,Sara, ....why were they in this place at nig-

That's when I saw..

My sisters phone.. it was still on..how?it said. "Hi I'm Elena's bestfriend. Please invite me to her birthday party. Go to 76 brio road and invite me and my other friends."

What? They shouldve known that I have no friends. Kind of sad for me. But I meant it. I have no family now. I still have my dad but he hardly comes home. He is already gone when I wake up but comes home at night. At around 8 pm.

I told him what happened and he'd said that we would have a funeral for them in 1 week. We would bury them all together and write what we want to write like loving or aunt or sister and cousin and crush.

I feel bad for what happened to them. Could this be on accident or purpose?

It looks as if someone planted this to happen. I mean the message and everything.

Later that night my dad picked me up in his car. We went home. Why them? We also went to the store since it was 5 pm. We went to the store to buy some foods. I got candy. Jolly rancher gummies. "That it honey?" My dad said. "Yup"

We paid for everything and were going to leave but. The power went out and it was raining. How?!

"Everyone please stay inside until the power turns on and the door open sorry for the inconvenience"

The door were the automatic ones that's why. What now?!

Growls we heard. Monsters.

Run

RUN

RUN!!!

the power came on.. everyone was covered in blood.claw Mark's on their chests. What?!how?I stay there with my dad paralyzed with fear.

Is this the monster that killed my family and crush?!

We stand.looking at 3 people with knives and a monster eating someone.

What the fu-

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