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Can You Dream? 2 Persey

By Alythia48 All Rights Reserved ©

Fantasy / Horror

89. Aéolyn - Cara Delevingne

I love that weather between summer and fall

But it’s also a nice feeling to know summer is approaching

Tate holds my hand and we just lock

He smiles and I get butterflies

When I sense he’s going to move his hair

I push it away for him

He says it

What I’ve been craving for

‘Let’s kill someone.’

I jump in for a kiss

Touching his chest as I do

Like an excited teen

I walk with a bounce of anticipation

I follow Tate

His scent surrounds me

With a sense of wonder and attraction

He knows exactly where he’s going

He tells me

They’re girls he says

A brunette and a blonde

You’ll like the blonde he says

I’ll really like her

That’s what he says

They’re a lesbian version of Bonnie and Clyde

Going on a nonsensical rampage

Killing anyone they have a chance to

He points to them in a crowd

There he says

His voice coerces me

He’s right the blonde is gorgeous

She looks just like Cara Delevingne

Her hair flies in the wind like a phoenix

Her eyes like lily pedals in her sockets

Green, vibrant

I unlocked my gravitation to her to witnessed the brunette

The blue in her eyes shocked me


Yet important

Her power lies there

Streaks of a variety of colors plagued her natural auburn hair

It pried out of her scalp praying for attention

They sat there drinking fancy Cosmopolitans

Like average women

With not a care in the world

Tate tells me he just wanted me to see them

But we had to go to his apartment first

To fix it for them

If I could lift an eyebrow really high

I would

He takes my hand and pulls me away from them

We go back to his apartment

A warm place


Nearly spotless

With a life of its own really

The walls a warm brown

The floor with white tiles

Huge speakers

And a king size bed

With red and black comforters

You could get lost within

He walks in and turns on the music


Then he walks back to me and kisses me ever so lightly

‘Let’s begin.’

He says

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