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One Bloody Summer

By Writings_Of_RLC All Rights Reserved ©

Thriller / Horror

One Bloody Summer

Edward Robinson's family owned a beach house in South Beach Florida.  It was Summer Break and he and 10 of his friends decided to spent there Summer Break there. They were free and ready to enjoy themselves. Their fun was about to be cut short and turn into a blood bath of terror. They weren't prepared for what was to come.  It was hot on there first day. it was 4 on 4 a game of volleyball.
Samantha and Ronald decided to venture down near the beach by the rocks.  It was a great distance down away from the beach house. They went for a dip. After a little swim the started making love on the sand. Samantha seen a figure. The figure wore a scuba driver's mask she couldn't make out who he was. He  carried a long spear. He stabbed her in the throat blood came pouring out of her neck like a fountain. Ronald was stunned. The Figure grabbed a hacksaw from his tool belt he wore and severed Ronald's head. He through there bodies in the drink.
It was now dusk the volleyball game was still going on. They wondered where Samantha and Ronald was. a missed spike sent the ball  down by the rocks. Edward went and got it and began to serve again. A sudden rain of blood came down upon them. Screams from them all as they realized it wasn't the  ball but Ronald's head. They all ran into the beach house fearful not sure what to think, was it real or were they imagining it They had no cell service and to top it off their vehicles had all 4 tires slashed. The lights went out. They were in the dark.Roy and Sarah had one thing on there mind sex. "You two aren't going out there." said Amy. "Yes we are." said Sarah. "I am hot and horny and I wanna fuck and swim." Edward demanded. "We need to go and contact the police." Roy laughed."You do that man, I am going to get my rocks off. He and Sarah headed out of the  beach house and down to the water.
Edward started walking with Tonya. They were headed to find the police to report the grizzly discovery of Ronald's head. Meanwhile Roy and Sarah took off their clothes and took a skinny dip in the ocean. It wasn't long before they died a brutal death. Sarah was stabbed in the bead with a knife her brain fell out onto the rocks. Roy tried to escape The deadly figure grabbed his leg and broke it with one tug. Roy screeched in pain. The figure grabbed a rock and bashed him in the mouth knocking out all of his teeth. Then he proceeded to end his life be ripping out his windpipe. This brutality was unreal and grotesque.
The lights came back on Raymond got them back on by fixing the circuit breakers. He Amy, Todd, and Susan, heard noises coming from outside. "Go look egg head laughed Todd telling Raymond. "Come with me." said Raymond fearfully. "Ok  puss." said Todd. "I go by myself." He stepped outside. Like a crazed maniac he screamed. It made them all think he was hurt. "You idiot Todd get back in here." shouted Susan. "There is nothing out here." said Todd. Suddenly he was met by the figure. He drug him by his head. He grabbed him and threw  him onto the ground. He pulled a hammer and nails from his  tool belt and drove nails into his eyes and face. Todd painful screams of suffering echoed throughout the area. The figure stepped  on his neck and crushed it. The others new they were next they had to get out of there and get out of there as fast as they could unseen.
Edward and Tonya made their way into town they found the local Sheriff's station. Their was nobody there. They knew they had to  find help ,anyone, someone who could help them. They entered a little Diner. Edward told them what happened. He said they needed to find the Sheriff. "Sheriff Sam is gone for the night." said a man drinking coffee at the counter. "He took a prisoner to the penitentiary. Edward explained everything. His parents buying the home a few summer's ago,Ronald's head. He left nothing out of his explanation. "That sounds like the handiwork of old man Conrad." said another man at the counter. "About 25 years ago Jeb Conrad's wife was killed in a boating accident." " It was their place, now your parent's boathouse." He continued. "Conrad took two tours in Vietnam he seen his entire platoon destroyed in front of him." He's psycho Sheriff Sam has been after  him for the past 15 years he kills everyone who enters the beach house." "He believes its his and his wife's and no one enters the grounds without suffering." "Why hasn't the Sheriff caught him." asked Tonya.  "Every time he sends the search  party to look for him they comeback with nothing." Its as if he disappeared or something." "They only find the  destruction he leaves behind. Edward and Tonya were more terrified now than ever they wondered how the others were. Were they still alive??
It was a struggle for Susan, Raymond ,and Amy. They tried to come up with an escape plan. Jeb Conrad was waiting outside lurking in the shadow's plotting his next kill. Susan Raymond and Amy grabbed kitchen knives whatever they could to defend themselves. They  ventured outside looking to escape. They ran down by the ocean. They came upon a shed. After going inside their discovery amazed them. They found tools. Axes,Knives and just about any deadly device known to man that could hurt you in a matter of minutes.  Also discovered was a  marriage license and a old shoe box along with pictures of a man and a woman. Pictures of the beach house and a sailboat. They headed out. Jeb was waiting. He had a machete in hand and sliced off Amy's head. Raymond had a knife he stabbed Jeb in the stomach. Jeb fell to the ground he dropped the machete. Susan picked it up and chopped off his leg. The ran as fast as they could they hopped into a vehicle and drove it with all 4 tires flat the hoped to make it into town. The left Jeb there hoping he would bleed to death and die. They didn't look back for nothing.
After Barely making it into town. Raymond and Susan arrived. They ran into Edward and Tonya. Both were filled in a Jeb Conrad and his story. It was now dawn and Sheriff Sam was back in town. He organized a search party and they went back to the beach house looking for Jeb Conrad. They searched the shed they found his leg. Also the gruesome bodies and carnage Jeb left behind but no Jeb. "Once again nothing Sheriff." said one of the  searchers. "Alright boys pack it up." said The Sheriff. "That's it." said Edward. "Your just going to give up." "Yes,son you just don't understand we have been  here before." One day I am certain we will find, catch and kill Jeb Conrad." "Today like many other days before it isn't the time." Edward was dumbfounded. He wanted Jeb found and killed for killing his friends. They all left. Would there be another hunt for Jeb Conrad?? Only time would tell. Was Jeb still alive? That was a mystery still unsolved did he go off to die or was he lurking in the shadows. Another disturbance at his beach house he just could be waiting.
                                 

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