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True Love

By Jordan Pacheco All Rights Reserved ©

Horror / Romance

True Love

Her breathing is labored, I should remove the tape from her mouth. Don't want her passing out. But what if she screams? I need her to stay awake, she needs to feel everything. I want to take my time with her, she's beautiful...I love her. I know i'll remove the tape then her tongue. I have to be quick to stop the bleeding.

Well here we go. Fuck she is screaming, doesn't she know they will take her away from me! Stop struggling this is for us. Finally she gets it, I gotta stop this bleeding. Her beautiful eyes, they are closing, stay awake! I promise i'll stop it. Dammit what do i do? She's bleeding to death. Why did you make me do this! I told you I love you. I can't save her...one last kiss my love.....it's just not the same with out a tongue.

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