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The Lake

By Meara Pennak All Rights Reserved ยฉ

Horror / Other

Prologue

I couldn't breath...

As I watch as the surface of the lake with panic blue eyes...

Kicking, thrashing my arms and my legs as I tried to kick up towards the surface

of the lake...

But all I did was sink, deeper and deeper into the cold lake...

My silver blonde hair swirling around my face...

Air bubbles began floating towards the surface...

"I'm going to die..." I bitterly thought as continued sinking down into the dark

lake...

Rage and hatred exploded inside me...

"It's because of them! This is their fault! I will get my revenge!" I thought as I

finally blacked out...

Now I am down here...

In the dark and cold lake...

Always taking my next victim...

Or waiting for one...


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