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After the Living

By AlliesContestWriting All Rights Reserved ©

Horror / Mystery

Chapter 1

Loneliness.

That's all what's in his mind for now.

No. For a full one year. He had lost his wife on the very same date one year ago.

An accident took his one true love away. Now no one will ever be there for him again.

His other relatives keep telling him that her wife had gone to a better place. But to him, she's probably living one hell of a life by now.

Until one night, where an event will change all of his point of view of the afterlife.

Hello. My name is Ran Dominic. I am here to tell you a story about how my friend almost become insane.

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