Pool people (short story)

All Rights Reserved ©


My son told me about the pool was so scary but when my dog noticed it and I saw it man I was surprised so I looked into my house and boy I was shooked

Age Rating:

Pool people

I moved me and my son here to get a fresh start from his old school every one bullied him for his teeth condition there’s a pool and my son loves to swim but he was scared of the pool he said there was people standing at the bottom

of the pool and dead man floating on his face. I was creeped out I don’t know how but I almost believed him I was confused where he got that because he only watches Mickey Mouse club house so where the hell he got that from beats me. One night I decided to send my son off to his grandma house I was upstairs unpacking when I saw my dog Millie barking at the pool I went downstairs and out side I looked at the pool and what the hell I was so scared I saw exactly what my son described I grabbed my dog and ran inside grabbed everything I needed and went to my moms house with Millie I searched the web to look up my house and omg I can’t believe what I found my pool and house was built on top of a cemetery we moved and never went back

Continue Reading
Further Recommendations

Janke: I loved the fact that your technical writing skills are on point and how well you distinguish between different British dialects.Personally I really like the fact that altough Cate is the female protagonist, the male anti-hero type character of Malachi was the one to cause the trouble but was wil...

Anne: I am digging the plot. It's really good and I can't wait to get to the highlight of this story.

Brandy Vazquez: Well written, enjoyed reading this story!

shiny patel: Love this story very much your story is unique.Something new for me. She s so alone with him but still has spirit in her to fight him she won't give up easily

Jaidin Sloan: The lash ale shank babe am she dna

Viann0728’: Beautiful story, it kept me so intrigued through the whole story I finished it in a day!

bcb3: A compelling read. This book is a dark thriller and I couldn't put it down. Not for sensitive readers looking for romance.

Alison: Good story to read, although it was a bit of a shame that it wasn't proof read before being published.Some of the spelling and grammatical errors were atrocious.

Victoria Stover: Wonder what he goin do to her

More Recommendations

Kiara_vr: This book is absolutely amazing. There are no words to describe how mesmerizing the world painted and its characters are.

¿Ayla?: I like the style of this book it has alot of thought and meaning put into it, but the only thing i dislike is the gramar and spacings. Overall a very good book and one of my favs

Kimberlie Garcia: This a very fast paced story. Nothing wrong with that. It's nice for a change. Strong characters and strong story. I would like some info about the back stories on some of the characters though. Some of them are there but would like to know how they got to there. Thank you for the story and I can...

Leziel Cadalso: Interesting story

Lyndsay Magill: Ghbjfg jft htvhthj joyfnins h

Ginger Mowder: I like the book so far but I would like to read all of it b4 I rate the book.

About Us

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered publisher, providing a platform to discover hidden talents and turn them into globally successful authors. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books our readers love most on our sister app, GALATEA and other formats.