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A birthday ghost-hunt turned wrong. Liz has a second thoughts and a bad feeling about her best friend celebrating his birthday at an abandoned, ghost-infested Asylum but her friends insist she must celebrate with them. Things get complicated after they enter the dilapidated building and the situation turns for the worse. Will, any of them make it out alive? Or will they perish seeking an avoidable thrill?
Welcome.
This is a first attempt at writing a thriller/horror genre book. I welcome constructive criticism and comments to improve in this style. I've entered this book into the Midsummer Mystery Contest and The Halloween writing contest. I look forward to your comments.
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With much appreciation,
BVS, aka, TheSexyBrain
Sayhan: A great read so far. Good build up of suspense. My issue would be about Kazumi's and Sayaka's relationship, which is not very obvious.Characterwise, Yuko and Minami were obviously the most likeable characters so far and their connection was clearly stronger than the relationship Minami has with b...
