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Never let my Mom watch Disney

By badfakesmiles All Rights Reserved ©

Horror

Chapter 1

I guess I have moved on enough to tell this story.

One night, while I was preparing dinner, I left my mom on her wheelchair, sitting in front of the T.V.

My daughter, Ariel, was 7 months old at that time, and was sleeping upstairs in her crib. When I left the kitchen to invite my schizophrenic mom for dinner, she wasn't in the living room.

I heard her voice, cheering upstairs. When I got there, I saw her in the bathroom, clapping and cheering at the bathtub that was overflowing with water.

"Go Ariel! Go find Prince Eric!"

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