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All Alone

By StarPixelation All Rights Reserved ©

Horror / Scifi

The Screech

Alone, trapped in darkness, lost.

I couldn't escape, I couldn't find anything, I couldn't find anyone.You'd think I would've tried to look, tried to at least make an effort but instead I sat in the dark. The world around me was wet and moist like a marsh. Then all of a sudden the walls started to close in on me, crushing me, all hope was lost but suddenly a screech made me push forward.
I frantically squirmed about using even my teeth. I ripped through the walls of the strange cave, until I jumped out. I landed in light. Red was liquid was coming from a strange four legged creature which I escaped from, it had no scales and no claws. All it had was hair and skin, it was disgusting.
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