Chapter 1
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A weekend in a quiet and quaint lakehouse in the middle of the woods, no one to disturb just you and your friends. Isn't it the perfect getaway weekend? Well definitely Choel and her friends thought so until they discovered that everything isn't as rosy &quiet as it appears and this weekend might turn out to be the last and the most horrendous of all because THEY WANT VENGEANCE ...
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LittleScribbler: Hi SteveIt was a great start, good build-up of character and word choice, and plenty of intrique. Excellent writing!The sex scene didn't do anything for the story and would have been better left out. It was a strong, well written scene that could go into another book.Your ending was clever, but i...