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This story is about a kid and these monsters and if the kid opens his eyes then the monster will eat him the kids name is Ben and his little sisters name is Ashley and they are also going on a trip to find their parents but they can not open there eyes or else the monsters will eat them.

Horror / Drama
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Chapter 1 The flusters

Hi my name is Ben. And this is my little sister Ashley now me and Ashley’s parents are divorced but we are ok with that. Me and Ashley are twins but I say that she is my little sister because I am one minute older than her I like it but she does not any way. Our parents are gone now, it all started this morning every thing was a little bit strange. First of all me and my mom and Ashley where sitting on the couch watching a movie when all the sudden something flew by really quick it almost looked like a dinosaur. And then my dad was in the kitchen eating and when he closed his eyes there where these monsters. But then when he opened his eyes they would stack him.
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evikher: I really liked the story, it was different, interesting and not always obvious what is going to happen in advance. Definitely better than part 1. On the other hand, some corrections would be really helpful.😉 So, keep writing! It is good. You will get there!

huriya089: I think the author has displayed a very good understanding of the characters and I am thoughrly enjoying reading this

grandma12192001: I liked how they met up again and I would recommend this to all my friends. The style is good. It ended great great.

Paula Chastain: Omg I lived this. I fell into this story. I felt like I was Cassie. I am very family oriented and this story was so full of support and love.

amalia3026: Its a fun read...well worth it

Zeynep Esin: I liked the chapter

Katerina_2008: It was tooooo short (pouting)😥😥😥

Shivani Singh: So far the best student- teacher romance 😍😍

Madison Bennett: I’m absolutely obsessed with this series. Just enough action & drama mixed with just enough romance. Keep the good work coming!

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