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It's a story about a trip of four childhood friends to a different, offbeat place, where they got engaged in different adventures and fun. But the fun leads them to a mysterious situation where they found out something about the place that gonna scar them for the rest of their lives..

Horror / Mystery
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Hello readers...
This is a horror story about a trip of a few friends to a newly discovered, untouched natural beauty place and their experiences in the trip..
It's a fictional story and my first attempt 😉so I want your support guys..
Hope you'll like it and give me your precious feedbacks ❣️

"Come on Niti, we would be late again because of you.." Roy shouted honking his car outside Niti's apartment.
"Yeah.. coming, just 2minutes" she shouted back.
"Urrrggghhh.. she's always late" said Niya rolling her eyes.
"Come on guys.. don't spoil the mood! We've been waiting for this trip right?"
"Yeahhh.." both Roy and Niya said in a boring tone.

It's a long waited trip for them after their graduation.. Niti, Roy, Niya, Josh they're all childhood friends, instead of their different personalities they all can die for each other.

"So guys, where is this place again?" Niti asks entering the car.
"Should start with something like 'sorry, I'm late" Roy mocks her.
"Oh, you know that never gonna happen" she replied flipping her hair.
"Let's go now? It's really far away from the city, totally untouched nature.. we'll go trekking, site seeing.. it's called Bartola, recently some travel blogger posted a video of this place..guys it's beautiful", said Josh.. He's the most excited one for
this trip.
" Okay, Mr. Hyper" Niya replied punching his arm..

"Here we go.. we're coming to you unknown beauty!!!" Roy races the car.

Hey readers! Wanna know what happens after that? Please let me know in the comment section.. keep reading 💗💗

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