Get Free Copy

100 free copies left

This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.

0
Free copy left
You can read our best books
Horror_Diaries would love your feedback! Got a few minutes to write a review?
Write a Review

He's Such a Lady Killer

By Horror_Diaries All Rights Reserved ©

Thriller / Horror

Untitled Chapter

The flickering lantern’s light that danced across her face seemed to mirror her personality perfectly. How her hair flowed flawlessly to match her eyes that glinted with each illuminance the lantern bestowed. The picturesque night under a black blanket that surrounded everything the lantern could not touch. The night was perfect. The cliche phrase of “how magic filled the air” rolled off my tongue as I leaned in for a kiss. A gentle kiss that would sweep her off her feet. The midnight picnic under the stars was proceeding elegantly. Now, I could go on with more romantic cliches about this wondrous night but that’s not who I am. No, in fact I am quite the opposite. I harbor a deep dark secret that only certain ladies know about. I regrettably haven’t seen these ladies in quite sometime considering that they are about 6 feet under my rose bushes.


With her physically erotic way of asking what my desires are, I surrendered the elicit eyes that I know drives every girl to ecstasy and said:


“Baby, then I’d have to kill you.”


She laughed as she placed the plastic wine glass up to her cherry soft lips. Seeing the dribble of champagne spill off the side of her lips made the killer instinct inside me quiver to the point of grabbing her silky smooth head of hair in for another kiss. The passion between us was like two fiery hot teens on prom night back at the hotel room. The level of intensity was immature and illusive. I knew I wanted to take her right then and there but it had to be subtle, so naturally, I offered her another drink back at my place.


She giggled and settled with the proposal. She whispered in my ear that the warming temperature between us was beginning to tickle. I knew I had her hooked. Placing my hand sensually on the small of her back I guided her to the car.


The car ride back started to get steamy. Seeing her fidget in the seat I knew she was nervous. I placed my hand on the top of her knee and guided it down to arouse the red mini dress a few inches. She intercepted the notion and with a playful smile, she said “not yet”


She was the first lady that played in with my stimulating attitude. Her peculiar opinion sent signals below my ab sculpted torso that I could not ignore. I could see that her sexual tension was beginning to get the best of her as we locked eyes. I ripped the car off the shoulder and pulled her to the back seat.


When the act was done, we proceeded to my spacious loft up in the hills of Malibu. Placing another glass of champagne in her delicate hand, she inspired a glance to the bedroom. She wanted more of this chiseled man and who was I to neglect her?


With the gesturing to the bedroom, I followed her. What a surprise she was going to get once the lights gleamed the entire room. Laying on the bed was a single blade. Puzzled she asked me if I was into the kinky stuff to which I replied:


“No, just the murdering part” as I gently slide the blade into her abdomen.


The End.
Write a Review Did you enjoy my story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, Horror_Diaries
Continue Reading
Further Recommendations

Ben Gauger: Kudos go to Karissa, author of Elements Of Engagement, an otherwise dark and twisted tale of love and workplace intrigue, very 'Fifty Shades of Grey' to be sure, her writing style being very graphic ad otherwise sexually-charged, hence the 'Fifty Shades of Grey' reference, and as for her use of g...

Ali Albazaz: I started reading "Caged" few hours ago and I'm on chapter 7 now. Caged is definitely one of the most addictive stories I've ever read. Thank you so much for writing this novel.

europeanlove: I gotta hand it to you. I love reading. I read books everyday. When the book is good I can read it in probably 13 hours. Your story was amazing. Great prose, very imaginative. Incredible dialogue. I am deeply impressed. Keep it up.

E_W_Hemmings: First of all, sorry this review took so long: I've had science mocks recently and then when I came to read this, I made notes to put in the review like I usually do... but then I deleted them. Well done me. As a result, this review is a bit more general than most reviews I write, but hey ho, let'...

Shelley Miller: The ideas and the set up and this are amazing! The feel of the story goes from science fiction to horror to suspense all in a big, thrilling ball. I really like your character so far and her powers and the idea of the ark being a person. The world is intense and gritty and clever as well. While a...

Carolyn Hahn-Re: I really liked this story! The writing was well done, and the plot was suspenseful. I couldn't stop reading chapter after chapter, on the edge of my seat! The characters were well developed, and true to form. Thank you so much for this wonderful read.

Alex Reltin: This is a great story! I love how well you go into detail and emotions of Capri, and Mel. You have amazing dialogue and overall it's just a thrill to read!The only critique I could find is that some of the paragraphs should be separated. For example:-"If Nia would have just let me take the car an...

Someone: This was a fun, entertaining read. Although the novel wasn’t stylistically polished, and although the first couple of chapters struggled to hold my attention, the rest of the novel was engaging and beautifully done. You had me fooled until the end. The rest of this review will contain spoilers fo...

Deleted User: This is a very clever story in the style of 19th century (and turn of the century) Gothic writing, very reminiscent of Stevenson's The Body Snatchers or even of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde (less so of Frankenstein itself, since the author is more minimalist than Shelley's florid, Romantic rhetoric). ...

More Recommendations

: The book was hella great. You never know what's going to happen next. There's a lot of clues that shows to the next scene. I thought Miley and David would marry each other in this book but too my disappointment, they didn't. I have a ques. Will there be a part two to this book?

Ben Gauger: Kudos to Bryan Laesch, author of Remnants of Chaos:Chaotic Omens for his use of the Gothic style of writing and in addition the footnotes and endnotes at the end of each chapter, a welcome accompaniment to be sure, though his use of grammar could use a little improving, but his use of punctuation...

nightdrummer: Best story ever. The characters are real, flawed, people I relate to because although they have unbelievable talents they also fail, and get stuff wrong. This should be a series. Alpha is the most interesting hero and Martel's scary/real. I love Sunday.

This story wasn't for you ?
Look at our most viral stories!
Iosaghar

FreakyPoet: "you made me laugh, made me cry, both are hard to do. I spent most of the night reading your story, captivated. This is why you get full stars from me. Thanks for the great story!"

The Cyneweard

Sara Joy Bailey: "Full of depth and life. The plot was thrilling. The author's style flows naturally and the reader can easily slip into the pages of the story. Very well done."

This story wasn't for you ?
Look at our most viral story!
Spectra

Ro-Ange Olson: "Loved it and couldn't put it down. I really hope there is a sequel. Well written and the plot really moves forward."