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Mommy... Belongs To Me

By KarenPorterPoetry All Rights Reserved ©

Horror

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Outside there's a blanket 
of snow on the ground 
The winds are strong 
making a whistling sound 

With the baby asleep 
for the rest of the night 
she settles with some wine 
flames from the fire 
her only light 

She hears the baby cry 
up the stairs she creeps 
Goes into his room 
but he's sound asleep 

She can still hear 
a childs cries of pain 
her eyes meet a girls 
"Hello mommy 
nice to see you again" 

With a fright.. 
she runs from the room 
with a gut wrenching feeling 
of impending doom 

Peeking back in 
there the girl stands 
with a meat knife 
and needle in her hands 

"Come here mommy 
I want a cuddle 
you left me in the car 
in a messed up huddle" 

"No... No..... 
this cant be real 
you died that night" 
She reaches to feel 

The girl grabs her 
and pulls her down low 
stabs the needle 
in her neck 
"Now mommy's mellow" 

Like a doll 
on the floor 
she can still feel 
her body 
but can't move 
anymore 

Kneeling beside her 
piercing skin with the knife 
"Its your fault mommy 
I lost my life" 

"You drove the car 
and let it crash 
too much alcohol 
you were smashed" 

Slicing off her fingers 
one by one 
she loved playing with mommy 
Isnt this fun? 

Seething pain 
shooting through 
off pops a finger 
and there goes two 

Blood squirting everywhere 
time for the toes 
the pain is unbearable 
body stiff,  it never shows 

Slicing the sides of her mouth 
making a big  smile 
"That's much prettier mommy 
I've not seen it in a while" 

Cutting open her knees 
and pulling out the caps 
she bangs them together 
going rata tat tap.. 

Tears are falling 
her eyes start to swell.. 
"Dont worry mommy 
My brother will go 
with you aswell" 

Choking on her screams 
throat catching her breath 
Don't hurt the baby 
he doesn't deserve death 

The words never 
escaping her lips 
the girl raises the knife 
into mommy it slips 

Ripping out the heart 
It belongs to her, you see 
soothing sounds for 9months 
now it's hers for eternity..


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