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Mommy... Belongs To Me

By KarenPorterPoetry All Rights Reserved ©

Horror

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Outside there's a blanket
of snow on the ground
The winds are strong
making a whistling sound

With the baby asleep
for the rest of the night
she settles with some wine
flames from the fire
her only light

She hears the baby cry
up the stairs she creeps
Goes into his room
but he's sound asleep

She can still hear
a childs cries of pain
her eyes meet a girls
"Hello mommy
nice to see you again"

With a fright..
she runs from the room
with a gut wrenching feeling
of impending doom

Peeking back in
there the girl stands
with a meat knife
and needle in her hands

"Come here mommy
I want a cuddle
you left me in the car
in a messed up huddle"

"No... No.....
this cant be real
you died that night"
She reaches to feel

The girl grabs her
and pulls her down low
stabs the needle
in her neck
"Now mommy's mellow"

Like a doll
on the floor
she can still feel
her body
but can't move
anymore

Kneeling beside her
piercing skin with the knife
"Its your fault mommy
I lost my life"

"You drove the car
and let it crash
too much alcohol
you were smashed"

Slicing off her fingers
one by one
she loved playing with mommy
Isnt this fun?

Seething pain
shooting through
off pops a finger
and there goes two

Blood squirting everywhere
time for the toes
the pain is unbearable
body stiff, it never shows

Slicing the sides of her mouth
making a big smile
"That's much prettier mommy
I've not seen it in a while"

Cutting open her knees
and pulling out the caps
she bangs them together
going rata tat tap..

Tears are falling
her eyes start to swell..
"Dont worry mommy
My brother will go
with you aswell"

Choking on her screams
throat catching her breath
Don't hurt the baby
he doesn't deserve death

The words never
escaping her lips
the girl raises the knife
into mommy it slips

Ripping out the heart
It belongs to her, you see
soothing sounds for 9months
now it's hers for eternity..


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