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Dark Cave on sacrifice Island

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Adventure / Horror

Dark Cave on Sacrifice Island

Dark Cave on Sacrifice Island

Newzealand National Geographic Channel award winner director Stone and his team decide to travel to Fiji islands for a photography shoot on rare species of birds . All board a small ship to reach the island , The team proposes to travel by sea so that they would enjoy beautiful and magical scenes of the sea in the journey , The journey will take two days to reach the destination . Team of stone includes one cameraman, himself, Jane the reporter Boat navigator will accompany them. , The sky is clear and sun is shining brightly . All people start to enjoy the journey with cameraman shooting the beautiful blue waters . First day passes bye with a flash

Next early morning ship crew receives a call from weather forecast base that a storm is heading towards them and told them to be on alert but also confirms that storm would get weak . Suddenly weather gets very bad and waves and strong winds start to hit the boat , Navigator tries to control the boat but it gets very dangerous, Suddenly winds hits navigation and surveillance system and damage it completely, All communication is shut down with base , All wait for the storm to settle down , The night passes away in distress and disappointment . In the morning the navigator sees a island , he puts on his binocular and watches the Cave , He turns boat to the cave island , In the meanwhile navigator trys to call to base but all in vain as no communication takes place ,

The ship reaches the shore and now cave is clearly visible , The camera man gets down from boat & climbs to reach the Cave . He shouts for any body around but no call back, He calls all people on boat to come to the Cave . Everybody climbs to reach cave taking their belongings with them . Team enters cave and are bedazzled to see from inside it was more like a museum with paintings on wall of different species of birds , beautiful places, vegetations ,caves about the island . Stone smiles & tells team it was just like a dream come true whatever he wanted in his documentary , this island had it , Jane is afraid and asks how could this happen on which Stone tells might be this cave belonged to some photographer who has decorated the cave & had gone out to shoot & will return soon

All again shout “ Any one there “ with no success “. Since all are tired and freaked out they decide to go to rooms for rest and sleep ., The navigator finds that food and wine in the kitchen and tells anybody angry can eat.

Late evening all get together in common painting room , Jane decides to cook some dinner , After having dinner all go to sleep and stone tells for a documentary shoot in morning as per painting in the cave. , Team moves deep inside the island for documentary shoot . Stone is amazed to see the different birds & vegetation of island as per paintings . The Cameraman captures all of it & Stone is satisfied with it

The team decides to return back to island cave as done for the day . As they cross a small stream suddenly cameraman is left behind and he disappears unnoticed . All shout for him but in vain , Everybody is now afraid after the disappearance of cameraman , Stone tells navigator to fix the radio on boat immediately so that they can contact the base . Stone and Jane decide to go out in island and search for help while navigator can fix radio back.

Navigator tells stone to be careful and hands over a hunting knife for self protection . Jane and stone leave the cave for search , They decide to climb a top of a hill so that visibility will be more . As they are climbing uphill , Jane sees caves as per painting. Both of them get into the cave and see colorful paintings on the walls of the cave but suddenly Jane is hit from behind on head and falls unconscious on the ground . Both wake up to find their hands and legs lying in the ground . They are stunned to see naked cameraman in front of them tied to a pole , Behind cameraman is a giant statue of a frightening demon who is wearing chain of human heads .

There are several tribal man surrounding him and singing loudly with huge fire in between, Soon tribal king comes and shouts on one man carrying a huge knife , man immediately cuts toe finger of Cameraman , cameraman shouts in pain and again tribe man cuts the other finger one , He is crying with pain and is calling for help , Stone tells Jane that it is a cannibal tribe and they are offering human sacrifice to their Demon, he also states that tribe believes in “ MORE PERSON SHOUTS MORE HAPPY WILL BE THE DEMON “ and that is why they are cutting cameraman slowly till he dies

Jane and Stone are horrified and believe that they would also be killed in the same way .Next day Stone is slowly sacrificed to death. Jane is dragged to be next human sacrifice but navigator comes in with a gun and saves Jane from being killed They both run out from place towards the boat , Navigator narrates to Jane that he had solved mystery that Island was a sacrifice island and deserted cave was magical cave whose interior décor shapes itself according to the people chosen for sacrifice as in their case it was painting of birds & vegetation in the cave setting up a trap for sacrifice by cannibal tribe . Navigator is killed by one tribe man as their boat is to leave the island , Jane is only left and is rescued . She is hospitalized due to trauma and narrates story to police agents , but was surprised that where she was found there was no island in 100 miles


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