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I thought i did everything perfectly

By BlackRose @--%--- All Rights Reserved ©

Thriller / Horror

I thought I did everything perfectly

I thought i did everything perfectly, but i ques i did not . I thought to myself after watching police cars surrounding little forest near my home. How could they have found it so easily after all the things i did.

In my mind we had perfect relationship, but something went wrong and i found that stain of makeup from your shirt. Did you really think i would not notice ?

I waited you when you arrived from work. How happy you were when i had cooked you dinner and made coffee with fresh apple pie after it .

Little did you know that it had special spice in it . I watched you starting to sweat after eating and you started to complain how it was getting harder and harder to breath. You had no idea why did i just sat there and drink my coffee while you were chocking, you poor bastard.

Even now while you sat there your face against the table and take your last breath you disgust me . When it had been quiet for several minutes i drag you to the garage and put you inside my car and drove to the woods.

Then next morning i did my best to look worried and started calling to your workplace , to your relatives and finally to the police how you had not come home last night and how it was not like you to stay away without informing me .

With help of my co-worker i printed out several missing posters and placed them around the town. I smiled when i saw how people truly wanted to help and i trusted that it would all go perfectly after all i had hidden you so well.

Days turned into weeks when i suddenly had call from police that your body had been discovered " damn" i thought

I managed to act as woman in distress to the officer who arrived my home and he believed it. But then rumors about your affair started going around the town and fingers started be pointed at me .

I thought i did everything perfectly but i ques i did not . Now i have to run and this story will be part of my perfect get away.

This time i will do everything perfectly i know it......

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