Write a Review

You're Too Much

All Rights Reserved ©


“Well?” AJ stood up, his hands somewhat shaking in anticipation. She held the pregnancy test in her hand and walked over to AJ showing him the result. He swallowed as he looked at the result. “Well look at that.” He smiled. “I’m going to be a dad.” He hugged Vanessa, kissing her forehead.

“What are we going to do AJ?” She looked up into his dark brown eyes. “I know you want to keep it, but where will we live? How will we support the baby?”

“First thing is that you need to calm down ok.” He tapped her nose playfully. “We have to tell our parents.”

“How could you be so calm about this?” Her eyebrows were furrowed in worry.

“Cause...after graduation, we all get an inheritance and a house of our own. It was my late grandfather’s wish and written in his will.”

“What?” She said barely above a whisper, but a ray of hope filled her heart. AJ smiled, taking her into his arms. He kissed the top of her head.

“I can go to college here in this town so that I will always be there for you and not miss the birth of our child.”

“How did I get so lucky to have you as a boyfriend?” Her tears ran down her cheeks. AJ used his thumbs to wipe it away.

“I’m the one who is lucky to have you...the both of you.” He bent down to kiss her quaking lips. He then pulled her in closer making the kiss more passionate. Vanessa’s arms came up his back holding onto him. The love that they felt for each other was overwhelming to the both of them. AJ suddenly chuckled when he pulled away from their kiss, making Vanessa wonder what was so funny. “TJ is gonna have fun with this.”

“Why?” Her facial expression in question.

“When we were in Jamaica, I gave him condoms telling him to wrap it before he taps it because mom isn’t ready to be a grandmother, and here I am standing with my pregnant girlfriend.” She laughed along with him, until something he said made her nervous.

“Your mom is gonna hate me.” She said nervously.

“Nah she won’t.” He assured her. “She’ll probably be upset at first, but once she holds the baby in her arms, she will definitely want us to have more.” He chuckled.

“Let’s just hope there is only one.” She said and his eyebrows went up. “What?”

“I plan to put a lot of babies inside you.” She hit his shoulder rolling her eyes.

“I’m pregnant with our first and you’re already planning more?”

“I come from a big family babe. Of course I will want more.”

“I’m gonna have my ovaries removed as soon as this one is born.” She smirked at him.

“Not if I have anything to say about it.” He kissed her forehead. “Get some sleep.” He playfully slapped her ass. “You need rest. I’ll stop by tomorrow so that we can talk to your parents first ok.”

Vanessa bit her lower lip as her nerves once again surfaced. “You’re not scared?”

“Of course I am. I have to be the one to tell your dad that I knocked up his daughter. Thank God I can support us or your dad would have my balls crushed and mixed it in Nutella then shove it down my throat.” Vanessa laughed at his analogy. “Good night my love.” He then knelt down holding her hips, then placed a kiss on her flat belly. “Good night my baby.” He got up and kissed Vanessa again before leaving. Vanessa went to sleep that night feeling happy and nervous at the same time.

AJ parked the car in the driveway and heard talking as he came into the house. His mother was straddling his father on the sofa making out. They were both dressed, but enjoying each other’s company. “Hey mom, dad.” He just kept walking towards the stairs heading towards his bedroom.

MJ kissed her husband’s cheek without looking at her son. “Hey baby.”

“Hey son,” JJ kept his focus on his very hot wife. “Which one was that one?”

“I don’t know. They all look alike.” She kissed his neck. “Wanna take this upstairs?”

“Nope. I wanna take you right here. Those fuckers won’t come down when they hear us fucking.” He flipped MJ over making her squeal in excitement.

AJ plopped on his bed taking in a deep breath. He heard a light knock, then CJ appeared without waiting for permission to enter. “Couldn’t you wait....”

“No fucking way. Mom and dad are going at it downstairs. Can’t you hear them?” CJ helped himself to sit down on a chair. “So am I going to be an uncle?” AJ put his arms behind his head, crossing his legs then looking at his curious brother.

“Yup.” He popped the P with a huge grin on his face.

“You’re keeping the baby right?” CJ questioned worriedly.

“Of course we are. I would never allow for her to have an abortion.” His tone and face are serious.

“Even if it’s her body, her decision?”

“Her body belongs to me and half of me is growing inside of her.” He scoffed sitting up on his bed. “I’m going over to her house tomorrow to break the baby news to her parents.”

“I think that you should tell mom and dad first, then they can accompany you to Vanessa’s house and tell her parents.”

“I would love to do that, but our parents can’t keep their hands off each other at this moment.”

“I hope to have a happy marriage like theirs one day. It feels good to know that mom and dad still love each other after all these years and four horrible sons.”

Another soft knock on AJ’s door, then without waiting for a response, TJ and DJ walked in.

DJ pushed TJ to the side as he flopped on AJ’s bed. “What are you guys talking about?”

TJ glared at DJ, then turned his attention to AJ and CJ. “Yeah, it looks serious.”

AJ rubbed the back of his neck before clearing his throat. “Vanessa is pregnant. We’re keeping the baby. You’re all going to become uncles.”

DJ’s eyes opened wide, “Holy shit!” TJ was about to open his mouth when AJ interrupted.

“Save it TJ. I know what you’re going to say and we did use protection. The condom must have broken.”

TJ shook his head, “Mom is not going to be happy about becoming a grandmother so young.”

DJ nodded, but then added. “Yeah well she wouldn’t want to hear about an abortion either.”

“She’s so against it,” CJ agreed with DJ. “I mean, the woman birthed four! In one day!”

AJ chuckled knowing fully well that in his family, once a child is conceived, it stays. “I’m against that shit. Remember when I got really sick and had to have my appendix removed?” They all nodded. “Well, the hospital has magazines on the table and I picked one up to pass the time and there it was. An article with pictures of abortion and what method of procedures are done. It grossed me the fuck out.”

“Lucky for you,” TJ spoke up. “All of us get an inheritance after graduation with a house.”

CJ smiled at the thought of having his own place and free from his parents. “I look forward to that.”

AJ nodded, “Yeah that saved my ass big time.”

DJ sat up to face AJ, “Are you going to attend college here in town?”

“Yeah. Once I finish, Vanessa can go to college. By then the baby will be in kindergarten.”

TJ looked at AJ with surprise, “You have it all figured out huh bro?”

“I have responsibilities and obligations now. Can’t fuck around anymore.” CJ, TJ and DJ all got up and gave AJ a hug of congratulations.

“And don’t worry if you need a babysitter. Purple and I will watch over the little one while you and Vanessa go out on date night.”

“I’m going to hold you to that.” He laughed. “Now get the fuck out of my room. I’m going to sleep. I have a big day tomorrow.” All three flipped him the finger as they stepped out of his room and into their own.


MJ and JJ were sitting at the table enjoying their breakfast as they talked. AJ walked into the room, taking a seat across from them. He folded his hands and cleared his throat in an obnoxious fashion, getting both MJ and JJ to look at him and waiting for him to speak.

“Is he going to say something?” JJ whispered sideways to his wife.

“I don’t know. He won’t speak up.” She responded quietly.

“Is there something that you want to say AJ?” JJ questioned.

“Hey speak up you’re starting to freak me out.” MJ blurted out. AJ cleared his throat again and took a deep breath.

“I need to talk to you guys....it’s very important.”

“Ok, so talk.” JJ crossed his arms over his chest.

AJ just realized how difficult this conversation actually was and began to stumble with his words. “I...I umm....I got...”

“OMG you have herpes...” MJ gasped as she held her hand across her chest.

JJ’s eyes squinted at his nervous son, “Gonorrhea...”

“Syphilis...” MJ scrunched up her face in disgust.

“Crabs....” JJ put out his arms as if he were a crab and moved as he were walking.

“Da fuck?!” AJ was shocked by their accusations. “No man, I got Vanesa pregnant!”

JJ and MJ just stared at him “.......”

“Say something...Anything, please.”


“Mommmm, you know I can’t keep my dick in my pants.” He rubbed the side of his neck.

“It’s true babe, he can’t.” JJ looked at MJ’s very pissed off face. “But that doesn’t excuse you AJ!” He pointed a finger scolding him.

“AJ”, she rubbed her temples. “When did you and Vanessa find out?”

“Last night when she took the pregnancy test.” He rubbed the back of his neck again. “I refuse for her to get an abortion, and we can move into my house when we graduate. I will provide for my family.”

“You damn straight you will provide for your family. Your mother and I didn’t raise you boys to be slackers and deadbeat dads.”

“Lucky for me, grandfather left an inheritance. I can pay for my tuition at a college here at home.”

“Your dad and I already have money for all your boys’ college tuition so don’t worry about that.”

“Really mom?” He put his head down. She walked over to AJ embracing him in her arms. JJ joined in.

“Really.” She held him tight. “You idiot.”

“I can’t believe we’re going to be grandparents.” JJ couldn’t help but smile.

“What did Vanessa’s parents say about it?” MJ asked as an after thought.

“They don’t know as of yet. I was hoping that you and dad can accompany me to help Vanessa tell them.”

JJ smiled. “Of course we will, right honey?”

“Of course. Now get dressed AJ cause we are leaving in 20 minutes. I suggest that you call Vanessa and let her know.”

As AJ reached the stairs to go up, all three of his brothers were standing on the top of the stairs listening to the outcome. As AJ smiled up at them, they all smiled back giving him the thumbs up. Suddenly MJ appeared next to AJ.

“I hope that the rest of you douche bags are using condoms. You too TJ when the time comes.”

“His cherry has already popped mom.” CJ couldn’t help but torment his brother and seeing the increasingly shade of embarrassment coat his face.

“Really?” MJ said a little too excitedly.

“Really CJ?” TJ scowled at CJ, who in return winked at him.

“Aww TJ.” She placed her hand over her heart. “My baby has gotten himself deflowered.”

DJ, AJ, CJ joined in unison, “Deflowered?!” They all laughed while TJ blushed profusely with a small smile on his face.


Everyone was sitting in the living room. AJ sat next to Vanessa holding her hand as his thumb gently rubbed circles over her knuckles to comfort her as they waited for Vanessa’s parents to respond to the baby news.

“Mom? Dad?” She held her breath waiting for their response.

“Vanessa, AJ. How could you both have been so irresponsible?” Tiffany voiced her disappointment and her eyes full of tears.

“What about college Vanessa? You always talked about being a kindergarten teacher and now you have to put your studies aside to raise a baby.” Her father Dominic said.

AJ, noticing Vanessa crumbling before her parents at their news, jumped into her defense. “She wouldn’t be raising the baby alone. I will be right by her side to raise our child together and she can still go to college. It will just be here and not in another state.”

MJ quickly spoke up, “Tiffany, Dominic, the baby will be raised properly and taken care of when AJ and Vanessa study. JJ and I refuse for them to take any time off from college....”

“They have to secure a future for their child and themselves,” JJ added.

Dominic stood up pacing back and forth as he tried to put together the circumstances that lay ahead. “How will they do this? They’re babies themselves.”

“Once AJ graduates, he automatically gets a house and an inheritance that his grandfather left him.” JJ said.

“It won’t be easy, raising a child while you’re kids yourselves.” Tiffany looked at AJ and Vanessa.

“Mom, I’m not going to sit here and say that I know because I don’t. I’m scared, and had AJ not been so supportive, I would’ve been a mess right now.”

“Are you going to do right by my daughter and grandchild young man?” Dominic’s face is serious and focuses solely on AJ.

“Yes sir I am.” He turned to look at Vanessa. “I want us to be married before our baby is born.” He watched Vanessa’s eyes tear up, then finally fall down her cheeks as she just stared into his eyes speechless. “Will you marry me Vanessa?” She whispered yes before throwing her arms around his neck.

“Looks like we have a wedding to plan.” JJ rubbed his hands together a little too excitedly. AJ scrunched up his eyebrows at his father.

Tiffany sighed as she looked at the young parents to be. “Is this before or after graduation?”

“Hold on guys please.” Vanessa took a deep breath. “I will be six months pregnant during prom and seven months during graduation. I don’t want my wedding to also show a big belly.”

“But babe...”

“No AJ, I refuse.” She took both his hands in hers. “Why can’t we just go to City Hall and get married, then have a small reception in the backyard after the baby is born?”

“Is that what you want, baby?”

“Yes, please. I’d like to look pretty in one of my dresses that doesn’t require me to wonder what my shoes look like or if I’m even wearing the right pair.”

“Alright baby. Whatever you want is what we will do.” He pressed his forehead against hers as he cupped her face in both of his hands.

“Thank you babe.” She whispers with a smile.

Dominic sat by his daughter as he took her hand in his, “Sweetheart, do you want to be homeschooled during your pregnancy. Kids can be mean.”

Vanessa scoffed at the idea, “Absolutely not....”

“Babe, maybe your dad has a point, but I will stand by whatever decision that you make.”

“Vanessa honey,” Tiffany began. “Take it from me. Once your pregnancy progresses, you will feel exhausted most of the time...”

MJ added, “Feet too swollen to walk from class to class...”

AJ mumbled as he looked down to the floor as if it were the most interesting thing he’s ever seen, “Not able to fit at your desk....”

Tiffany heard him and smirked, but quickly recovered by adding more reasons. “Mood swings....”

MJ picked up where Tiffany was going, “Always hungry and have to wait until lunchtime to eat...”

“What if they have lunch that makes you sick or nauseous?” AJ asked knowing fully well that Vanessa hated school food.

“OMG ok, ok.” Vanessa practically shouted.

Dominic clapped his hands as he looked around his family and guests, “I’ll call the school tomorrow and arrange a meeting with your school’s principal.”

Purple’s Room

Purple was lying in her bed after finishing drying her hair from the long hot shower that she took when suddenly she heard her phone beep with a message.


Hey babe, what are you doing?


Nothing much. Just lying in bed


Are you lying in bed naked?


No U perv, haha




Don’t what me ;) So what’s sup?


I’m stalking U




Yeah, look out UR bedroom window

Purple still holding the phone in her hand walked towards her window and sure enough, there was CJ waving at her.


CJ what R U doing here?


Open UR window. I’m going to climb up.


R U crazy? My mom is home!


Come on angel eyes, I miss U.....Pleeeeeeaaasssseeeee

Purple rolled her eyes as she giggled. She opened her window and stepped away to lock her door. By the time she turned around, CJ already had one foot inside her room. He suddenly tripped and fell to the floor with a loud thump. Purple nervously shushed him when she heard a knock on the door. She shoved CJ into the closet, then opened the door to see her mother standing with a curious look on her face.

“Are you ok? I heard a loud thump.”

“I fell out of my bed.” She laughed softly.

“Did you have a bad dream?”

“No, I was tangled in my sheets and when I tried to adjust it, I fell. I didn’t realize I was that close to the edge.”

“Ok honey. I’m going back to bed. I took my sleeping pills and it’s kicking in real fast. I will be out in the next 30 seconds.” She walked away to her own room, leaving Purple with a sigh of relief. Purple locked her bedroom door as CJ came out of the closet plopping himself on her bed. He patted the empty side for her to occupy. Purple smiled at him, but did as he wanted. He wrapped an arm around her shoulders as his fingers caressed her bare arm. She cuddled up next to him enjoying his warmth.

“So you missed me huh?” She smiled without looking up at him.

“I always miss you angel eyes.” He kissed the top of her head. “I can’t go a day without seeing you.”

“You’re going to forget about me when we start college.” CJ pushed Purple flat on her back as he hovered over her looking deep into her eyes. The intense look he was giving her made her gulp. “Why are you staring at me like that?” Her question barely above a whisper.

“I will never forget you babe.” His thumb gently caressed her cheek. “You belong to me and me only. Wherever you go to study, so will I.”

“You would do that?” Her eyes were full of hope.

“Of course.” He whispered. He then bent down, capturing her full bottom lip between his teeth. His tongue trailing her lower lip until she finally opened her mouth giving him access to taste her fully. The kiss was deep and hot. One of Purple’s hands came up to grab his hair while the other rested on his back digging her nails into his shoulder. With his free hand, CJ took her right leg hooking it over his hip, making room for him to adjust himself between her legs. The kiss kept going on strong and intense. Purple couldn’t help but moan as CJ’s hand slid under her pajama shirt to cup her right breast squeezing it. He broke the kiss but continued to kiss her jawline, then down her neck sucking it and leaving a hickie in its wake. Purple was so lost in the pleasure that he was giving her that she didn’t notice he lifted her shirt completely up exposing her breast to his view. CJ immediately latched his hot mouth on her breast sucking in a nipple. Purple took in a deep breath, biting her lower lip as he continued to work his magic on her hardened mounds.

“CJ,” She said breathlessly. “Mmmm CJ.”

“What is it baby?” His tongue glided down to her flat belly as his hands pulled down her pajama shorts exposing her white lace panties. “Do you want me to eat you?” His eyes looked up for permission. When she bit her lower lip nodding, he pulled down her lace panty off and put it in his pocket. With his head between her thighs, his tongue slid up and down the slit of her opening. Purple moaned as her hands got lost in his hair. CJ licked, sucked and bit her clit. He then slowly slid one finger inside of her while he continued to suck on her clit, making her moan louder. Purple’s eyes rolled back as her back arched wanting more.

“Mooore CJ...don’t...stop.” CJ groaned feeling his own cock harden with the need to be inside of her.

“Cum baby...cum in my mouth...I want your taste in my mouth.” He became aggressive as he ate her delicious pussy.

“Oooohhhh CJ...please...” She purred out his name.

“Please what angel eyes?”

“I want....you... inside of me.” Her chest moved quickly up and down. CJ moved up to look her straight in her purple pleading eyes.

“Are you sure that’s what you want, baby?” She held his face in her hands, nodding with a smile. CJ removed his clothes, discarding it to the floor except a condom he removed from his pocket. He ripped the sealed package and was about to roll the condom on his hardened cock when Purple took it from him and began rolling it on for him. She watched his reaction when her hands came into contact with his engorged dick. Her eyes opened wide from his size, but she refused to turn back now. Once the condom was securely on, she lied back as CJ followed her. She felt the tip of his cock slide up and down her opening. CJ pushed himself slowly inside of her feeling how tight she was. “Fuck baby, you’re so tight on my cock.” He closed his eyes trying to control himself from thrusting hard into her. He moved slowly so that she could adjust to his size. Purple bit her lip trying not to scream out.





“Are you...ok baby?”

“Y...yes.” She hid her face in the crook of his neck. CJ thrusted deeper into her, picking up speed. They were both moaning and groaning. CJ sat on his haunches grabbing her behind the knees pushing both her legs up to her chest giving him more access to thrust deeper into her. CJ was balls deep inside of her, making Purple scream out both pleasure and pain. Her eyebrows furrowed as her nails raked down CJ’s arms leaving long bright red marks.

“Damn Angel Eyes...I love you!” He thrusted harder as her hips rocked along with him. He felt her walls clamp down on his cock which let him know that she was on the brink of orgasm. With the final few hard thrust, they both came undone. CJ collapsed on top of her taking in quick breaths. He finally rolled off getting up to remove the condom. As he made a knot and tossed it in her trash bin, he noticed the blood on it. He smiled with pride as he was the one to be Purple’s first and he was determined to be her last. Lying back in bed, he pulled Purple to his side.

“Did you mean it CJ?” He smiled as he gently made circular patterns on her forearm. She looked up at him waiting for his confirmation.

“Yes I meant it.” He tilted her chin gently with his thumb and finger to look into her eyes. “I’ve always loved you angel eyes.” Her eyes became watery until it spilled down her cheeks. Tears of joy and love.

“I love you too CJ.” He kissed her passionately, his heart soaring with happiness.

“That means the world to me. You mean the world to me.” He gazed lovingly into her mesmerizing eyes. “Can I tell you something?”

“Of course you can. You can ask me anything.”

“You will marry me one day.” His words were so confident and very honest that it took Purple by surprise. “You belong to me and me only.” He then tapped her butt twice. “Come on, get up and shower with me. I want to wash the blood off of you.” Purple blushed an immense red shade. CJ laughed because he thought she was adorable. He grabbed his boxers and took the towel Purple gave him as she put on her bathrobe. They both quietly stepped out of her room and headed into the bathroom. Once inside, Purple turned on the shower. As she was about to remove her robe, she stopped midway as she felt CJ’s eyes on her.

“What? What is it?” He took two steps towards her, pulling her into his arms kissing her deeply. He loosened her robe ties and let it fall around her feet on the floor.

“God you’re so beautiful.” He whispered against her lips. He removed his boxers and stepped into the shower holding his hand out for Purple to take it helping her in. He took her body wash soaking her loofa and washing her off. Purple allowed CJ to pamper her body with his sensuous touches and kisses. “I love you Purple.” He whispered into her ear.

“I love you too.” Her arms wrapped around his waist pulling his muscular body as close as possible against her own. They dried each other after their intimate shower and snuck back into her room where they fell asleep in each other’s arms.

Continue Reading Next Chapter

About Us

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered publisher, providing a platform to discover hidden talents and turn them into globally successful authors. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books our readers love most on our sister app, GALATEA and other formats.