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BItter

By SkriegHev All Rights Reserved ©

Drama / Humor

It's ON-AIR!

"In 1.....2.....3......Action!"

intro music playing. It's a variety talk show program named Late Night with Billy Victory on air. That talk show don't show much success. The rating is very low especially after Steve Carson's incident. They call its episode as the best variety talk show ever. The impact is the show got an emmy award and Steve Carson got an emmy. However, it's just a wink. After that, people don't love it anymore. A lot of tv critics don't know why people don't love it anymore. Maybe, this is the final show. You can't see Billy Vic on this show anymore after this moment.

"Hello everybody! we meet again, in this show! tonight we have a guest that really special for us and maybe for you too. It's big day for him, everyone! please welcome Ray Hobbs!" said Billy enthusiast.

Audience really happy and they clapping when Ray Hobbs coming from backstage. They screaming and they show some good spirit for the show. So, who is Ray? why he is so special? well, we don't know until show goes on, right? just see.....

"How are you?" ask Billy.

"Well, i'm good. How about you?" said Ray with deadspan tone.

"i'm good but you don't look good. Are you unhappy? c'mon you are on the show. We pay you for this show. You should be happy."

"Yeah, whatever" said Ray still with deadspan tone.

"hmm... i heard that you don't want to live in this planet anymore. Why?"

"I don't know, Billy. It's stressful in here. I feel like i always get rejected, man."

"Why do you feel like that?"

Ray's face change after the question. He looks like he wants to cry.

"It's okay, Ray if you want to crying because it will increase our rating." said Billy enthusiast and try to motivate Ray to cry.

"What the hell, man!" said Ray with crying voice.

"Finally! that's okay, that's good for your health, just cry." said Billy with smile on his face.

The audience become sympathy with Ray.

"You know, i do a lot of good things to get a good result but the ending is crap. I try to love but i get rejected too. She's so high. Damn."

"So, it means you get double tap?"

"Yeah, it's freaking double tap, man. i am failed in everything." said Ray. he's crying.

"oh" said Billy with sympathy tone. the audience imitate him with same voice.

"Well, Ray, you have to give us another story."

"What?!"

The rating fall off. nobody watch it. Everybody hates it. Nobody reads this story. Good Game! Well done! Nice! Woo ho! Wrong country for high hope! Wrong country for dreamer! yeah!

"I can't believe it. The rating fall off? I mean c'mon, We'd just started and everybody just leave? oh snap!" said Billy

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