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The Sad Confession:Love is Forever

By Incognito_H All Rights Reserved ©

Romance / Mystery

The Poem

There was a chilly mist that hung over the sleepy town. A man wearing a long hooded cloak walked along a dirt path, remembering a bittersweet memory.


The man held a red rose to the air

Breathing deeply he began,

I wish that you knew I loved you,

That I could go back in time to tell.

We quarreled relentlessly,

And feuded forever,

But now I finally see the light.

You were the best of friend,

Though not to me,

You helped them through the thick and thin.

When you were hurt

By me or someone else

They picked you up after.

Growing up, I found my feelings grow stronger,

But you never would know.

You left school and married

Leaving me behind

Longing after you.

I've searched through everywhere,

The crowded streets,

To the empty countryside,

You hid from my sight.

But I've finally am able

To tell you the truth,

Though time has taken its leave

For you to be with me…

He dropped the rose on the dry grass,

And settled on his fate:

To be forever parted from his one love, even after death.

Nevertheless, before he left.

He glanced back,

And smiled at the grave.

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