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Akashya is a mystery story of two boys in Brighton, England who find a strange box that shows them there is more to life than what we realise and helps them find their true path. This is intended as a submission for the mystery competition in August 2020.
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Xaviera Y. Garza: This is an amazing story and well written I have been through a lot of trauma myself so don't normally read when it's made up drama but this is done so well and I appreciate that she doesn't just quickly heal move on with things cuz that's not how it really happens. You have done such a good job ...
Syuha Rosly: It is a very interesting crime solving, mytery story. I like how it was injected with a bit of romance in between. Although, it was a bit jumpy on the scene transition, and a bit confusing on which point of view we are currently reading. Overall the plot was good and I enjoy reading it.