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Was I stupid to love you? Was it obvious to everybody else Fool me once, fool me twice Are you death or paradise? Now you'll never see me cry
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Syuha Rosly: It is a very interesting crime solving, mytery story. I like how it was injected with a bit of romance in between. Although, it was a bit jumpy on the scene transition, and a bit confusing on which point of view we are currently reading. Overall the plot was good and I enjoy reading it.
skryz3r1: The idea of the plot is original and great, however the character development so far isn’t ideal. There’s too many characters to focus on. It might’ve been better to introduce them in a slower pace so you can get to understand each individually rather than an overwhelming 4/5? mates in what seems...
