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Bride and Seek

By BlackRose @--%--- All Rights Reserved ©

Mystery / Horror

it is time for dark wedding

May i tell you about the game that is played in weddings? This nice little game to entertain everyone and ad to this all needed twist to it to make it fun and so that people will remember it for years to come or that is at this case anyways.

I think everyone remembers this innocent game from childhood called hide and seek don’t they? In this time it was the brides maid that was ” it” and her job was to search everyone else . We all vanished to different directions and he counted to 100 and started the search . Sounds fun doesn’t it ? but just wait it get’s better

After an hour she had found almost everyone almost cause the star of the day the bride was still not found .First they all searched with admire for the smart bride who had found genius spot to hide but after hours of search everyone got tired and even the groom went home thinking the bride had chickened out and left him feeling shame that she had not got backbone to say to him it would not work between them.

after some time he got on with his life and never really thought about the bride and what ever did happen to her that day. Years after that day there was renovation done in the wedding site and two of the workers found old trunk from the corner of the attic of that place . As being humans and as humans are they got curious for the opportunity to found something from that trunk that might have some value they opened it up

But to their shock and horror they did not find any hidden treasure but they found dressed in something that used to be white but now moldy something that had creepy smile in its face . Smile of shock and relieve it was finally found. And why would it have. They had found me hadn’t they ?


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