Chapter 1
THE BOY WHO FROZE HIMSELF
There was a UN-thankful UN-grateful DIS-obedient child named Frank. He LOVED to through pranks the two words FR...
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this story is about a boy who froze himself not in ice in time....
THE BOY WHO FROZE HIMSELF
There was a UN-thankful UN-grateful DIS-obedient child named Frank. He LOVED to through pranks the two words FR...
quilinejj: I think the story is interesting, as are the characters. The plot is reasonable and holds the readers attention.Unfortunately it could do with a serious edit. There's so many typo's and repeated sentences, incorrect gender usage ie. 'he' when it should be 'she', etc. The sheer volume of these mis...