Chapter 1
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I grew up thinking what I was born for, there was no love concern or anything that made me feel like I was born to be someone. I have loved lost and hurt and done the hurting but yet I feel so lost. I’ve tried to be better then my past, yet not better then the next. I have almost lost my life many times and still I’m here wondering we’re love is. Where that person is for me who can love me for me.
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beaner4499: I really enjoy that you write the book with both characters POV’s. It’s nice as the reader to hear that it’s not one sided. In reality you’re always wondering if the person likes you as much as you like them, but with the 2 POV’s it’s nice to know they mutually like one another!As always I thorou...
Saavikam17: Respectfully I dont think this short story should end there. Everthing has been laid out like the imtroductory chapter of a novel, its a taster of more to come but the last part just doesn't feel complete somehow.I did enjoy what I read but didn't understand what the 'smirking' was all about.I c...
Kapua MB: Overall sweet story with detailed characters. I feel there were some missed opportunities for further character and storyline development. The epilogue explained everything that happened to each character, but as a reader I would have loved to read a few more chapters to get the full experience. ...