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Relatos de una mente incomprendida

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Summary

Crear relatos cortos de personas y mias propias algunas inventadas.. ojala les guste

Genre:
Other / Poetry
Author:
Milagros
Status:
Ongoing
Chapters:
3
Rating:
n/a
Age Rating:
16+

Aquel otoño

Ellos no sabian que sus vidas cambiarian de un dia para otro...

Como un bucle infinito quedaron grabados en su mente un final feliz

Que ese final estaba cerca

Y bailaron por la eternidad bajo el atardecer de un otoño fresco y lleno de colores tenues

Ambos se amaban y se aferraron a esa ilusión de que vivirían siempre juntos por el resto de sus vidas...

Sin darse cuenta que ya estaban destinados a otros destinos

El desespero estaba oculto entre ambos

Aguantando los gritos internos que los sofocaban se unieron en un beso desesperado por unir sus almas y ser uno mismo

Ese beso fue su forma de decir que se amaban mas de lo que realmente dirían en palabras

Se sonrieron y comenzaron a caminar en direcciones opuestas

Ambos haciendose pedazos

Como fichas rotas de una tabla de ajedrez

Ambos ahogaron sus lamentos en silencio y lagrimas amargas llenas de dolor

Ninguno de los dos sabia que el uno y el otro se anhelaba con el alma y su ser

Y aunque se allan alejado sea donde sea

O si es en Júpiter o en otro planeta su amor vivira en cada historia cada verso

Cada otoño volveran a bailar

Cada atardecer se veran los colores y sus dos almas siendo solo un ser....

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