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First Love

By Liane McCarthy All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Romance

First Love



Your breath seeps into the skin of my neck,
Your fingers cling to my lifebuoy hips,
Burning fingerprints into my skin.
Our bodies move to a rhythm that only we know.
Your kisses feel like home,
Your touch tastes like adventure.
I shudder as your body moves against me.
Seconds feel like forever,
Time suspended in the air.
With every sway your eyes get wider.
You’re the only thing that matters.
You’re the only thing that matters.
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