Forever

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Summary

Original poem I wrote back around 2007

Genre:
Poetry
Author:
Tralalalaci
Status:
Complete
Chapters:
1
Rating:
n/a
Age Rating:
13+

Forever

In the beginning we promised our forever's to each other...

Broken hopes and promises
Recurring dreams awake me in tears forever was to short
The flame that was once so bright fades to nothingness
Never again to be ignited it has brunt out
Twisted truths and forgotten lies stole the beauty once between us
Time travels on my feelings fade, you left me wounded and betrayed
Love felt lost life made lost, time falls short
Love, life, and pain taken for granted
Time wasted love merely tasted is all that came of us
Forever was to short...


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