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Forever

By Tralalalaci All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Forever

In the beginning we promised our forever's to each other...

Broken hopes and promises
Recurring dreams awake me in tears forever was to short
The flame that was once so bright fades to nothingness
Never again to be ignited it has brunt out
Twisted truths and forgotten lies stole the beauty once between us
Time travels on my feelings fade, you left me wounded and betrayed
Love felt lost life made lost, time falls short
Love, life, and pain taken for granted
Time wasted love merely tasted is all that came of us
Forever was to short...


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Richard D. Cooper: I wish I could write poetry like this. It's clever because it also tells a story, too. I like the flow of it, the way sentences slip together as they should. Very good indeed. I have also started to read your others works, and will review them when finished. Keep going. Never stop.

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K.J. Sylvan: This poem is a quick read, but one that pulls you in with the strong feeling emitted by the first four lines. From those lines alone, you know the tone and atmosphere of the rest of the poem: the sadness, and the strong image of the weeping widow, which you assume will grow stronger as you read o...