Forever

By Tralalalaci All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Forever

In the beginning we promised our forever's to each other...

Broken hopes and promises
Recurring dreams awake me in tears forever was to short
The flame that was once so bright fades to nothingness
Never again to be ignited it has brunt out
Twisted truths and forgotten lies stole the beauty once between us
Time travels on my feelings fade, you left me wounded and betrayed
Love felt lost life made lost, time falls short
Love, life, and pain taken for granted
Time wasted love merely tasted is all that came of us
Forever was to short...


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Lalaa Johnson: I can't help but to love these poems. There is so much emotion in them, that I find myself feeling it too. I'd love to read more of your poetry. I haven't read a poem that has touched me in a long while. Now I finally have. Thank you for that

RASmith: To my mind your short introduction offers great promise and has the potential to bring alive a wonderful read, I noticed some errors and it would enable the story to flow if these were to be corrected, that said I shall seek out your novel and have a read. Keep writing and bring your thoughts and...

RASmith: I truly enjoyed the few words which you wrote, I feel you have so much more to express and could build beautiful images with your words. Possibly expand and open your heart some more. I certainly for one would love to read more, keep writing and let your light shine.

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clayton smith: Hey very good poem read mine if you wouldn't mind

Menna Hassan: So far..I'm very intrigued and excited to see how this book will progress!

pencil: Something pulls at the heart and then distracts and makes it not pull. There is a urgency a haste to read and rally at the schizophrenic mind. But the schizophrenic mind is never sane and it is very unrelenting and not reliable. The images come and go and there is not much one can speak to someon...

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William Elliott Kern: Steph..........., interesting and well written. cudo's.........one suggestion if I may. Work a bit on the sentence structure and Grammar...........your writing style flows well, and the format you have created helps the reader stay with the story, and the poetry.william elliott at https://www....

Laraine Smith: This should be a movie! :)

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