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Collecting Thoughts

By TwistOfRhyme All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Other

Gap

seed of idea
creativity waters
germinate
foundation builds
consider
roots of thought dig deep
cultivate
sunshine grows a garden
tantalizing the senses
fragrance of flowers
texture of leaves
sound of birdsong
sting of a bee

ouch

tangible energy of story untold
sit at the desk
pick up the quill
dip in the well
drip on the page
drop from the mind
forgotten
gone

damn

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