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Lone Little Goat

By Xatyr All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Lone Little Goat

This little goat, he’s all alone.
Lost in a place full of wood and stone.
His legs are tired and his horns are cold.
Strayed too far from any friend to hold.
But he’s not afraid. He’ll find his home.
Somewhere greener with more space to roam.
And he’ll make new friends along his way.
He’s not too worried, just blue today.
This little goat, he’s all alone.
But he’ll make it out, one day. On his own.

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ChethanaRM: I love this story so much! It is wonderfully written and the characters are perfectly portrayed!

Laraine Smith: In addition to being humorous, this story is visual! This is also a beautiful story. Keep up the great work! :)

Laraine Smith: I was also a victim of verbal, physical, and sexual abuse by my father. One time, he threatened to beat me with a belt. This story enabled me to talk about it. Thank you. :)

maxniederhofer: Kara,I loved this. The one suggestion I would make is to show me, don't tell me. E.g."Now look at your skin / It is beautiful / You are beauty pure."It might be better to use more evocative imagery and language to make me feel, i.e. truly comprehend, the pure beauty, rather than telling me it is ...

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