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Discern

By G.O.T All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Romance

Discern

I walk through this open road
On my own
Light is cracking through
But Still I walk into this unknown
Falling down
And I don't know what to do

I met an angel dancing on the water
She smiled as she floated on
I tried to follow but I sank
To the ocean floor of my faith

Can you see me?
Do you feel it?
Am I on my own?
Oh is there anyone?
That can hear me
Or are my words falling short?
Cause I can't fake it
I can't hate this

I just don't understand why you can't explain

I see a lonely door
On its own
I think I lost the key
I hear a cold wind blow
Through the cracks
I feel it sweep away

I met an angel dancing on the street
She dared me to catch up with her
And I tried to follow but I sank
In the quicksand of my faith

Can you see me?
Can you feel it?
Am I on my own?
Oh is there anyone?
That can hear me
Or are my words falling short?
Cause I can't fake it
I can't hate this

I just don't understand why you can't explain

Gravity hurts
But not as much as hope
I, see the signs
But I still don't
Understand

I don't understand

Can you see me?
Can you feel it?
Am I on my own?
Oh is there anyone?
That can hear me
Or are my word falling short?
Cause I can't fake it
I can't hate this

I just don't understand why you can't explain

I don't understand
Why can't you explain?

I understand now
You don't have to explain

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