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Discern

By G.O.T All Rights Reserved ©

Romance / Poetry

Discern

I walk through this open road 
On my own 
Light is cracking through 
But Still I walk into this unknown 
Falling down
And I don't know what to do

I met an angel dancing on the water 
She smiled as she floated on 
I tried to follow but I sank 
To the ocean floor of my faith 

Can you see me?
Do you feel it?
Am I on my own?
Oh is there anyone?
That can hear me 
Or are my words falling short?
Cause I can't fake it
I can't hate this 

I just don't understand why you can't explain 

I see a lonely door 
On its own 
I think I lost the key 
I hear a cold wind blow 
Through the cracks 
I feel it sweep away 

I met an angel dancing on the street 
She dared me to catch up with her
And I tried to follow but I sank 
In the quicksand of my faith 

Can you see me?
Can you feel it?
Am I on my own?
Oh is there anyone?
That can hear me
Or are my words falling short?
Cause I can't fake it
I can't hate this

I just don't understand why you can't explain 

Gravity hurts 
But not as much as hope
I, see the signs 
But I still don't
Understand 

I don't understand 

 Can you see me?
Can you feel it? 
Am I on my own?
Oh is there anyone?
That can hear me 
Or are my word falling short?
Cause I can't fake it
I can't hate this 

I just don't understand why you can't explain 

I don't understand 
Why can't you explain?

I understand now  
You don't have to explain 

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