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The Fence Post

By AG Stewart All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

The Fence Post

A lone post

Keeps its vigil

Solid wood

Aged but strong

Rusted barbed wire

Dangling down

Standing on the peak

Of a slope covered

In deadened stalks of grass

The soft blue sky

Shining brightly behind

A single remnant

Of a long gone fence

Standing alone

On a hill


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