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Skating Parties!

By Laraine Smith All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Children

Blurb

Inspiration came from both www.snoopyshomeice.com/webcam-ice.html and the soundtrack to “The Peanuts Movie.”

Chapter 1

Lovers skate as pairs!

There is romance on the ice!

This is magical!

There are many kids!

They are playing many games,

And puppies lead them!

There is jazz music!

Mister Jazz Man is present!

People are cheering!

There is a party!

The lights are changing colors!

They make a rainbow!

Joy is in the air!

People are spinning around!

They are holding hands!

Skaters are dancing!

The skating rinks are crowded!

It is like Christmas!

It’s like a ballroom!

There are so many friendships!

There is harmony!

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