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By Bertie All Rights Reserved ©



Love is a Lollipop
All day long
Big and round
And very very strong
Mangoes and ice-cream
Sweet sugar song
Lick me
Eat me
Until I'm gone

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novicemaster: The imagery in this prose poem is glorious. I love the way you manipulate words. You seem to have harnessed them to bend to your every whim. The slightly archaic ones like "whilst" make this resemble a fairytale. The entire idea of a prose poem is brilliant. I didn't get the ending at first, but ...

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