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Burned without a Choice

By Sheila Woolum All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Horror

Burned without a choice

Burned without a choice,

Wishing in the wishing well,

falling upon my falling dwells , falling upon the broken glass

falling upon everything in my mind

giving you everything I had you gave me dead

came upon the mountain tops , only to fall down

came upon the ground to fall back on the stones

sure you should had known my name

giving me Birth to this losing game

insanity calls my fame without my fortune

giving me everything but perfect pictures

you show yourself without a blameless fault

you hide but give me a curse,

breath stolen without the fortune

love kindness it falls upon the dead,

you shout without the voice

Thunders fall upon the ground

clouds fall without the sound

nothing now I can call , I have lost my voice but I am still alone,

Screw the World screw the game

nothing matters but nothing but fame

losing games lost without a choice

I find myself lost within the game

Clouds show you sun , without the rain ,

knowing it comes all over again,

whats the point within this losing game

giving you everything but you keep me sane

Heart beating without my choice,

Love fills it without our curse

Breath upon my Neck of choices, curses.

Choices but curses giving me time.
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