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TO MARIA; I REMEMBER

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Summary

Love doesn't just start in a day, the true and pure version of it takes time to grow. Can two children grow up together without loving each other? Maria is a perfection on her own. From here to the moon and back, sing it to her hears. To Maria, I remember.

Genre:
Poetry
Author:
petenoit
Status:
Complete
Chapters:
2
Rating:
n/a
Age Rating:
13+

Chapter 1

I remember when we were younger;

Innocent, random and just ordinary playmates,

I remember how I once tried to bully you,

Till tomorrow, I don’t how she got to know,

She didn’t hesitate to scare the hell out of me,

Hmmm! Mummies, like a lioness she watched o’er her own,

God bless her and all her kind.


A boy and a girl, growing side by side,

Cruising happily through life and her tides,

From afar, what I always saw was a sister,

The kind my mom ne’er gave to me,

When she is happy; she has cute eyes, lovely smile and a graceful face,

When sad or indifferent; her eyes are always red, and she loves to keep quiet.


This baby girl is now an adult,

With all the features of a potential mother,

If I say she is flawless,

I hope my pen won’t be committing a blunder,

If any reader cares to know,

She is now first of many numbers.


On this special day,

I pray your face be filled with perfect smiles;

Of joy, peace and hope of better days,

Ahead beyond the miles,

And the shining prospect of the latter rays.


In the midst of all these going,

I hope you don’t think I’m joking,

About whom I think you are,

I wish I could write a longer story,

Of how grateful I am,

For making you a part of my history,

And a significant part of now,

When ev’rything is still happening,

The future is not far ahead,

I pray you find a happy one.

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PumpkinCreams: I love how all of these poems are unique.It has a lot of beautiful imagery to them as well.The grammar is perfect. The stanzas could’ve been divided into neater stanzas but overall. Beautiful!

D´rose: Me encanta como tramsmite las emociones. Lo destacable es que cada peqieña historia te deja una sensación diferente. Esta es demasiado personal duele demasiado.Me encanta como escribes aunque siento hace falta el manejo del punto. Fuera de ello funciona bien, son cortas pero dolorosas. Amo la poe...

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Dha-Niell: Pls just update M begging u from an author to another, I fancy the structure of your write up and the plot it's nice

army2120bts: Gracias todos los textos que escribes ,me hacen reflexionar y analizar todo lo que pasa en mi vida Gracias por hacerlo y espero que sigas escribiendo 💖💗

Mimie: I like the plot. I don't finish yet but this is an original story

Jeffrey Clyde Clem Swanson: Nice use of words

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