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By Haley Ladawn All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Other

blue eyes

his eyes reminded me of the ocean

a soft blue

an almost translucent color

but i could never see through him

he had depth like the sea too

his most treasured thoughts and feelings

were treasures on the bottom of the seafloor

buried deep underneath the surface

but i could never get to them

yet every once in a while

i caught the slightest glimpse of his thoughts and feelings

in the reflection of the ocean that was his eyes

and they were beautiful

even if he chose not to say them with his mouth

his blue eyes did it for him

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