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A Little Agitated

By itsnotnatural All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Other

Chapter 1

He's standing outside the crowd
Humming to himself out loud
People stare at him as if he is crazy
They wonder when he's gonna stop
Why can't someone shut him up
Maybe because they're too lazy to

Chorus

He dosen't notice all the attention
Doesn't see all the looks that he's getting
He hasn't heard all the hushes yet
Everybody's getting a little agitated


He hasn't caught himself yet
God he's so loud, it's like a plane overhead
He's been singing like this for over five minutes

Refrain


He finally finds himself and becomes quiet
Eventually people become less annoyed
And then he just leaves

Refrain


He now notices all the attention
Now he sees all the looks that he's getting
He has heard all the hushes already
Now no one's getting so agitated

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