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Water

By itsnotnatural All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Other

Chapter 1

Feel it's softness slither through your fingers
Feel it spread itself across your face
The way it comforts and changes
What you feel is a simple substance
Pure
Or as pure as it can be

Watch it
Watch it bring life
Watch it devastate
It continually shapes like God's hands

Even the word is as smooth and glassy
Like the surface of a lake
Very reflective

It is essential
As all creatures need it
All creatures are made from it

It is essential
Water

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