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2: Beyond Horizons

By itsnotnatural All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Horror

Lost in the Fold

When all of humanity
In each reality
Falls one by one

A merging locality
Made by each fatality
Primordial chaos
Will follow the rest

All one individuals' pulses
Shall become one of that alone

Averaging out
Unevenly

The walls that separate our universes
They will be repaired
But the damage cannot
The process must be reversed

They were lost in the fold
Merged into many minds
And many more still to go

This was what they wanted
But what have they invited

Yet absolute free will can still be attained
The Warriors of Assent believe
Free will will be achieved

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