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Care

By Kathryn_OConnor All Rights Reserved ©

Drama / Poetry

Care

Do you ever get the feeling that God hates you?

When you're world's falling apart, and there's nothing you can do,

So you pray

Only to feel like God, too, has gone away?

What a Friend we have in Jesus, all our sins and griefs to bear

But when to Him our griefs are taken, He seems never to care.

You're left floundering with this broken feeling

And prayers that don't even reach the ceiling,

And now you're wondering God, are You even there?

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