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Take Me Over

By Kathryn_OConnor All Rights Reserved ©

Drama / Poetry

Take Me Over

Be my hands and feet;

Be the life in me;

Be my heartbeat;

Take me over.

Lord, when all else fails

Put wind in my sails.

Lead me through life's gales.

Take me over.

When I'm on my knees

You're the one I need.

God, I'm under siege;

Take me over.

Now I need a friend;

My life's caving in.

Can I start again?

Take me over.

Give me strength each day,

And Your love and grace

For what comes my way.

Take me over.

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