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Isn't it Pretty?

By Scyler23 All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Isn't it Pretty?

Isn't it pretty?

Such a wonderful color

Deep and rich

Rolling darkly and deliciously across my skin

Isn't it pretty?

It stains what it touches forever preserving its beautiful color

I want it to last forever

Isn't it pretty?

I love the way it glistens in the light

Beautiful and red

Fluid as water but twice as thick

I'm not strange

I'm just obsessed

Don't judge me

You might just help my obsession

Because, as I said before,

Isn't it pretty?

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