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Snow

By Scyler23 All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry

Snow

Snow

A beautiful thing

A beautiful word

But beauty is a double edged blade

Beauty can be good

A source of affection and care

Kind to all who see it

Beauty can also be evil

Cutting through the darkness

Biting deep into flesh and bone

Snow is both good and evil

Beautiful and dark

Understanding and unforgiving

Fall not for the tantalizing softness

For underneath lies dark intent

Just waiting to break free of its beautiful confines

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CalvinPeat: This is a great concept, and you've done a largely excellent job of capturing the voice of Mal.You convey Mal's inner struggle well. Perhaps, though, you could reflect the hope in verses 13-17 of Psalm 90 a bit more. A suggestion: in the current version, Mal seems to be losing hope in the idea of...

preety_lady_serenity: I really liked the poem. It created this picture of a baroque style cafe that you kind of enter it to feel relaxed and yet you feel trapped due to outside circumstances.I especially loved the writing style, If one looks at it, it does look like a birdcage which is an excellent image to fit the po...

Medley_Cafe: By far my favorite of the three poems I saw you have! I was almost singing it for myself!Though if I may suggest a few changes that will make it flow even better?1st line make 'eye' 'eyes' as to rhyme with skies.2nd line end it with a full stop7th line "to see magic things"; make 'magic' 'magical...

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