A Door Closes

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Summary

This is about a young man's unrequited love for a young woman.

Genre:
Poetry / Drama
Author:
Laraine Smith
Status:
Complete
Chapters:
1
Rating:
n/a
Age Rating:
16+

Chapter 1

After soaking in a warm bath,

The glow from the candlelight comes alive.

I start to feel nervous.

The tears come to my eyes.

But I get up the courage.

I see you in the distance.

I reach out to touch your hair.

But I see you’re with somebody else.

A door closes.

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