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Waiting

By SunAndMoon All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Romance

Waiting

Alright, I admit it--
I needed you too much.

I needed you to fill the hole,
to make me feel like I was something,
not just an ice sculpture,
a frozen smile permanently carved on my face.

I was addicted to you,
but you weren't just another addiction--
I loved you as much as my battered heart would let me,
more than I've ever loved anyone.

Truly, I did.

That hasn't changed.

I still need you.

I still love you.

I always will.

It's okay if you don't need me,
but please don't stop loving me.

I couldn't stand it if that ever happened.

Now every day,
I listen and wait,
but there's no sound,
no word from you.

They tell me you're a lost cause,
but I won't give up hope.

Tears run down my cheeks,
but I smile through them.

I'd rather die than give you up,
so I hold on to you,
even if all I have left are memories.

Know that in the whole wide cruel world,
there will always be someone who loves you.

I don't care how long I have to wait to hear your voice again.

I will wait for you forever.

Would you wait for me, too?

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