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Lost in Love without a Mask

By Sheila Woolum All Rights Reserved ©

Romance / Poetry

In Sheilas Mind"

Why am I sitting here seeming to lose myself without any eyes to see, I can feel my bones dry as beneath my teeth , something we knew , something we both felt , why do I feel as though I am dead......


How could it be without my love for you , but without the love we knew, I had a heart that gave you my stars, they followed in the dust portals but came back with mars, something , within planets as though they spin, something I feel , time and time again....

Your in my heart I feel your name, as though your stamped upon my soul in my hands, I feel you as your longing singing within the sand, standing in the distance , but time allows me to stand,

your my everything to me , your my soul within the flames, how can I feel as though still its always me to blame , something I forgot to tell you , as though you walk away , something you never knew within your soul , I gave you pieces of me , as though the embers flame within the sea, they have meaning , they have a soul, they have life within these bones, they are eyes to the windows that only I can see, I allowed you to see through them , I gave you me,

your my heart , that I allow to beat, I am hoping for a soul , a never ending day , how can I be prepared for ties that are torn into , I am not without my soul , I am you .

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