Drowning

By Tiger Lover All Rights Reserved ©

Poetry / Other

Blurb

when your drowning you cant focus on anything but your life. your focus is on either living.... or dying.

Chapter 1

Chest aches,

hard to breathe,
can't tell whats up or down.
Panicked and screaming for someone to help me,
but no one can hear,
no one can see me struggle under the water.
floating up and down in the water,
It getting better and then worse.
Getting to the surface for just a breathe,
before you are pulled below the dark waves once more.
Sinking farther and farther while feeling the pressure increase.
Either kick and hope its the right direction or give in to the water,
but no matter what the water is always there.
It's now a matter of if your willing to kick to the surface so someone sees you.
Hoping,
you never hit rock bottom.

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